Much better,
but room for improvement [ as most of my old school teachers would say ] As others say bit more power or a bit less wire speed.
One technique I use when welding butted plates together is as well as moving the torch along I move it side to side across the join. This is only a small quick movement almost a quiver . The idea is to spread the base/area of the weld over the joint. Similar results can be had with a little circular movement as you move along. Keep at it you are doing well. Cheers.