A neat job. Keep the original jubilee clips and wash/de-grease them. If they were the original one's they might be better quality than the clips that come with the kit (I got 'really cheapo clips' with my 'really cheapo' set of hoses). Also tighten the clips up after a you put on a bit of mileage. I've just done a few hundred miles up to and around Yorkshire. The clip on the hose going to the from the 'black plastic thingy' to the EGR (top right) was loose and a few oil splats apparent.
What did you use to cut the hose?